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To: ArGee; Tax-chick; Monkey Face

Texas 2121: The Rookie

http://flscifi.blogspot.com/2015/08/short-story-texas-2121-rookie.html

(my second story set in that little universe)


3,817 posted on 08/03/2015 8:18:24 PM PDT by GeronL
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“Not as exotic as all that,” Chief Gramm said with a sly grin, “Meed Boda.”

Is that a typso, or is the character's name "Meed Boda"?

Really cute story, moves right along. I like the subtle way you put in the currency and what you did with the bartender character.

(Comma splices, a bit of confusion with tenses.)

3,820 posted on 08/04/2015 2:37:28 AM PDT by Tax-chick ("All the time live the truth with love in your heart." ~Fr. Ho Lung)
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