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To: Monkey Face; ArGee; Tax-chick
"I often thought poets were over-rated."

Most are. Many of our modern so-called poets are mere pretentious posers. If you don't understand the poem, and don't care if you ever see it again, it isn't much of a poem.

Poetry is structured to be memorable, if not quite memorizeable.

I want my poems to have a message, and to capture a moment of charm, wonder, or just plain fun, and to help us look at the world the way it needs to be seen, from every angle and aspect possible.

The Middle Distance

Off in the middle distance,
I often find my gaze,
While those who think I stare at them,
Don’t understand my ways.

I give to them my neutral face,
And draw my mental shades.
My inner image overwrites,
And reality slowly fades.

My view is filled with diagrams,
Of circuits, graphs, and charts.
I don’t intend the rudeness shown,
Such staring thus imparts.

I’m closed off in a world my own,
Your world has lost my focus.
If folks like me disturb your space,
Just reach across and poke us.

NicknamedBob . . . . . . August 29, 2007

6,420 posted on 06/08/2015 2:54:01 PM PDT by NicknamedBob (Mainstream Media reaction to "a Duggar admits he is not perfect" .. Why that's, that's .. Perfect!)
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To: NicknamedBob

Excellent, Bob! Thanks!


6,432 posted on 06/09/2015 5:07:15 AM PDT by Monkey Face (You may have created my past and screwed up my present but you have no control over my future.)
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