To: ThomasThomas; null and void; Gefn; Monkey Face
Anyone want to beta read a short story? (3,800 or so words) Very short.
Just look for typo’s (like too instead two/to) and places where words might be missing, grammar mistakes and the like.
Nothing major.
6,055 posted on
05/31/2015 8:56:55 PM PDT by
GeronL
(free short story: http://flscifi.blogspot.com/2015/05/free-short-story-proper-care-feeding-of.html)
To: GeronL
6,056 posted on
05/31/2015 9:03:52 PM PDT by
null and void
(All me life flashed before me eyes. [disappointed] It was really borin'.)
To: GeronL
Paragraph 5: should Home Owner’s Association be possessive?
6,057 posted on
05/31/2015 9:20:56 PM PDT by
null and void
(All me life flashed before me eyes. [disappointed] It was really borin'.)
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