[GeronL]

Here is the first page of the next story I am going to try and finish. It is 35-pages at the moment.

[NicknamedBob]

That reminds me of a story I’ve read. (Which shouldn’t be surprising; I’ve read a lot of stories).

I have a hunch your story will go in entirely different directions, though, so I won’t even mention which title it is until I have read yours.

I’m sure you will pulverize the pulp story I remember.