Her message is clear to me, and this is not a writing class. Attacking someones writing style is straight from the Alinsky playbook. I don’t get it. For over ten years, I have been reading about the degeneration of the girl scouts. This is a serious topic, and you have tried to be snarky. It’s about the message not the messenger.
This is a serious topic, and you have tried to be snarky.
***No. Very simply, the message was so poorly written as to be obscured completely.
It’s about the message not the messenger.
***And what have I said about the messenger? zip. I’ve been commenting on the message, which was very poorly written and as a result, the movement suffers.