Again. It simply is not clear what this author is writing nor requesting.
I’m glad you can see it. But your response doesn’t exactly enhance clarity when that’s precisely what I have asked for.
Hope this helps:
This is from the thread article:
” - - - LifeNews.com Note: Jill Stanek fought to stop live birth abortions after witnessing one as an RN at Christ Hospital in Oak Lawn, Illinois. That led to the Born Alive Infants Protection Act legislation, signed by President Bush, that would ensure that proper medical care be given to unborn children who survive botched abortion attempts. - - - “
As you can see, even her bio is disjointed.
IMHO, the author is:
* writing with high emotion
* skipping important connecting thoughts
* relying on hotlinks, images, and code phrases to fill out her article
* assuming that we agree with all that she has written.
Summary: Not a good article “to read in front of a writing class.”