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To: Political Junkie Too
Some of that "sea imagery" is pretty standard stuff: “Memory sails out upon a murky sea,” “a menacing calm,” “against the current,” and “into the current.”

Proving anything is going to be tough. If Obama and Ayers were that close, Ayers's phrases may have entered Obama's conversation and rough drafts without Ayers actually writing the book.

77 posted on 09/13/2013 2:01:55 PM PDT by x
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To: x
It may be standard stuff to a writer, but it may not be to a novice who can't even get past "um... ahh" when speaking extemporaneously.

It's hard to prove ghost-writing, but the circumstantial evidence is strong. Obama has no history of high-quality writing other than the books that he wrote when he met Ayers. Even though Obama came from an island state and an island nation where you might expect a high amount of water exposure and experience, Obama has not offered up any history as a youth of engaging in boating, fishing, surfing, or any interest in the sea at all.

If, with that background, I'm asked to believe that he's exceptional in the use of nautical metaphors strictly from research alone, it's a leap that I need more convincing to take.

-PJ

78 posted on 09/13/2013 2:50:00 PM PDT by Political Junkie Too (If you are the Posterity of We the People, then you are a Natural Born Citizen.)
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To: x
And one more thing...

It goes back to what I hinted at earlier, the use of shibboleths.

Writing about something that is so ingrained in one's culture and being, that it is almost an identifying trait, is something that stands apart from a description as a result of research.

The author of this article is setting up his separate points as shibboleths, things about this particular woman that are ingrained in her culture, her family, and her upbringing, backed up with circumstantial evidence including immersion in music, theater, and access to both across the street from her home.

Again, I am not a scholar in Shakespeare in any sense. I guess that frees me to be more accepting of the arguments made in this article.

-PJ

79 posted on 09/13/2013 3:01:01 PM PDT by Political Junkie Too (If you are the Posterity of We the People, then you are a Natural Born Citizen.)
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