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To: OneWingedShark

I think it is good satire. Maybe a little too much “over the top”. You could change that by making it more factual, not “explaining” the attitude, but merely commanding it.


3 posted on 07/17/2013 7:36:34 PM PDT by marktwain (The MSM must die for the Republic to live. Long live the new media!)
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To: marktwain
I think it is good satire. Maybe a little too much “over the top”. You could change that by making it more factual, not “explaining” the attitude, but merely commanding it.

Thank you. I was going to go for a more factually supported brochure perhaps including things like the Costco shooting, Ruby Ridge, Waco; various law cases, etc… but then it just got too fun to devolve into over the top. :D

But merely commanding versus explaining; I kind of like that idea.

9 posted on 07/17/2013 7:48:55 PM PDT by OneWingedShark (Q: Why am I here? A: To do Justly, to love mercy, and to walk humbly with my God.)
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