Given the lack of <p>, 50% of this thread's initial clickers will say
oy vey and bail w/o reading it.
Not being snarky with you, just a heads up.
Yes, I also thought that thus piece was not as well-edited as we would have been taught at that level of schooling. However, as this is exactly how the author wrote it, I did not feel it proper to correct it.
Perhaps your comment could be submitted to Mr. Heimbach directly responding to the piece as seen in the link to the WSU's site. But thanks for your concern.