Well done!
Text color might be better white though.
It kind of offends the eye a bit as is.
Maybe black and bolder.
I don’t know, the text just seems to grate.
Work on that and get back to me. Cheers.
As far as your critique, I just consider the source it's coming from, desperately wanting for attention as it is, LOL!
Y'all have the best day as y'all possibly can now.
Take a long drag off that Doral and get ya a swig or two of that Bud Light.