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To: Morgana
The bark is in high demand, especially in the herbal market. The bark is selling for $3.00 a pound. The bark is used as a soothing agent for cougs, gastrointestinal ailments, and skin irritations.

My English teacher would have marked 'repetitious' in red ink.

18 posted on 05/12/2012 10:30:05 PM PDT by Ken H (Austerity is the irresistible force. Entitlements are the immovable object.)
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To: Ken H
The bark is in high demand, especially in the herbal market. The bark is selling for $3.00 a pound. The bark is used as a soothing agent for coughs, gastrointestinal ailments, and skin irritations.

My English teacher would have marked 'repetitious' in red ink.

Perhaps:

Selling for $3.00 a pound, elm bark is in high demand in the herbal market where it is used as a soothing agent for coughs, gastrointestinal ailments, and skin irritations.

23 posted on 05/13/2012 4:15:04 AM PDT by JackOfVA
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