"Did the Emancipation Proclamation free all the slaves in the United States? Many people think it did, but the Emancipation Proclamation did not free all the slaves in the United States and here is why. The Emancipation Proclamation didn't actually free any slaves because it related only to areas under the control of the Confederacy. The South broke away from the North, and President Lincoln couldn't make slave owners living in the Confederate states of America obey the Emancipation Proclamation. After the Civil War ended and the South became part of the United States again, the South had to obey Lincoln. The Emancipation Proclamation didn't include slaves in the border states and in some southern areas under the North's control, such as Tennessee and parts of Virginia and Louisiana. Although no slaves were actually freed by the Emancipation Proclamation in 1863, it did lead to the 13th Amendment to the Constitution. The 13th Amendment became a law on December 18, 1865, and ended slavery in all parts of the United States."
“Please explain what is disjointed and rambling about:”
I believe I did, implictly, by parsing it. But specifically, the sentences don’t flow together. There’s no discernable line of thought. It’s one idea after another. At least one of those ideas (”no slaves were actually freed by the Emancipation Proclamation”) is baldly unsupported. Others are merely dubious.
Oh, and by the way, said paragraph directly addresses itself to a question that isn’t even at stake here. Namely, whether the Emancipation Proclamation freed all the slaves in the United States. I never said it did.