So far not bad. The author would leave the uniformed reader with the impression though, that the men and women are going through the same training with the same standards. Nothing is further from the truth.
Did you mean uniformed (wearing a uniform) or uninformed (as in lacking specific knowledge)? It does make a difference!
7 posted on 11/29/2009 6:40:02 AM PST by SES1066
(Cycling to conserve, Conservative to save, Saving to Retire, will Retire to Cycle.)