Is that your Apple graphic? If so, what software/renderer did you use?
The side edges are sharp. Think of a MacBook Air and you'll know what's wrong. Ive would never do that big gaping card slot on the side. The hinge looks external and tacked on, where Ive would have it integral. Plus, this is basically a touch notebook meant to be used vertically, not too groundbreaking. Overall, it's not something Ive would do.