[Quix]

I don’t recall

asking, much less begging

you or anyone to like my style.

My style is what it is.

You are most welcome to ignore it. I seems to have it’s own filtering mechanism built-in.

Mostly, I enjoy it as it is and it commnicates as I want it to,

to quite a number of folks.

You are quite welcome to opt-out.

[TalonDJ]

Mostly, I enjoy it as it is and it commnicates as I want it to,

no, it doesn't. You think it does because you read it with the intent you meant for it to have in your mind. So you mentally read it as if the breaks were dramatic pauses or whatever you seem to think they are. They aren't. To everyone else they are randomly interspersed line breaks. If they do read it as if someone was pausing a lot then it sounds like someone with out of breath trying to give a speech.

Butchering standard writing convention is not 'style'. It is just annoying to try to read. Plus it makes you come across as a nut. And trust me you don't need anything more that does that.

If your goal is to have fewer people take you seriously then you are succeeding just fine.