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To: WayzataJOHNN

Great poem! Strong images, easy to follow. I love the line about the spark dancers, I can see the sparks flying and dancing on the edges.

830 posted on 06/12/2008 1:38:06 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (I soar- 'cause I can...)

To: Soaring Feather

They were usually dancing down around my feet! (OUCH)

831 posted on 06/12/2008 3:23:40 PM PDT by WayzataJOHNN ( Poetry is the jazz of words, laid down by a feeling soul.)

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