[Soaring Feather]

This is just fabulous! Wonderful poem, and the trick with the light text for the daylight verse, then the black text for night, just so fine.

This poem is especially delightful to me. It is a fine piece of work. Clever, inventive, playful, serious, deep and lite all in one.

You should enter this in a competition, really you should.

BOB, may I enter this in The Lair Anthology?

[NicknamedBob]

That took a bit of HTML formatting, as you might guess. The original post, at http://www.freerepublic.com/focus/f-chat/1370297/posts?page=432#432 was more straightforward.

Do you plan to enter it under my real name? It's probably time for me to be outed, anyway.

And, um, ... what is the Lair Anthology?

[tomkow6]

"...a fine piece of work. Clever, inventive, playful, serious, deep and lite all in one."

Talking about me again???