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Posted on 08/29/2007 5:50:29 PM PDT by MrsEmmaPeel
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To: MrsEmmaPeel
I would say, “discussions like this,” because the speaker is relating other “discussions” to the ONE discussion currently taking place.
My daughter dreamed last night that she was practicing her three-point turns in the Methodist Church parking lot, with Pope Pius XII in the passenger seat.
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posted on
08/29/2007 5:54:36 PM PDT
by
Tax-chick
(Gravity! It's not just a good idea, it's the law!)
To: MrsEmmaPeel
In this case, Mrs. Peel, I believe "discussions" is in the plural, and therefore "these" is appropriate.
Punctuation might be a fraction off, however, and I think the sentence might be read thus:
"I so enjoy discussions like these", she said, wielding a bloody axe in her hand.
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posted on
08/29/2007 5:54:48 PM PDT
by
Old Sarge
(This tagline in memory of FReeper 68-69TonkinGulfYachtClub)
To: MrsEmmaPeel
Oh, and a comma between “said” and “wielding.”
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posted on
08/29/2007 5:55:06 PM PDT
by
Tax-chick
(Gravity! It's not just a good idea, it's the law!)
To: Old Sarge
Commas inside the quotes.
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posted on
08/29/2007 5:55:31 PM PDT
by
Tax-chick
(Gravity! It's not just a good idea, it's the law!)
To: MrsEmmaPeel
***”I so enjoy discussions like these”, she said wielding a bloody axe in her hand.***
Not a grammer police by any means, but I would correct it like this:
“I so enjoy discussions like this,” she said, wielding a bloody axe in her hand.
Note punctuation changes.
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posted on
08/29/2007 5:56:10 PM PDT
by
irishtenor
(There is no "I" in team, but there are two in IDIOT.)
To: Tax-chick
Comma before quotations, also.
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posted on
08/29/2007 5:57:11 PM PDT
by
irishtenor
(There is no "I" in team, but there are two in IDIOT.)
To: irishtenor
So true. That looks really funny, though.
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posted on
08/29/2007 5:58:01 PM PDT
by
Tax-chick
(Gravity! It's not just a good idea, it's the law!)
To: MrsEmmaPeel
ax is preferred to axe (nobody said that one)
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posted on
08/29/2007 5:59:32 PM PDT
by
firebrand
To: Old Sarge; Tax-chick
Thank you both. So far it looks as though we have one vote for this and one vote for these. I'm not clearer in finding the proper solution.
To: irishtenor; MrsEmmaPeel
Your version looks exactly right. The test on the object pronoun is to try it with the noun. “I so enjoy discussions like THIS discussion,” not, “I so enjoy discussions like THESE discussion.”
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posted on
08/29/2007 5:59:52 PM PDT
by
Tax-chick
(Gravity! It's not just a good idea, it's the law!)
To: MrsEmmaPeel
How many items on the agenda. If there was more than one about which you had a negative attitude, “these” would be correct. If just one, “this” would be correct.
To: irishtenor
I did not think to ask after the punctuation police. I sincerely thank you.
To: MrsEmmaPeel
Could it be she does more than one? A repetitive axe-wielder?
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posted on
08/29/2007 6:01:02 PM PDT
by
brityank
(The more I learn about the Constitution, the more I realise this Government is UNconstitutional !!)
To: Tax-chick; irishtenor; MrsEmmaPeel
EXCELLENT catch, you two.
And I nearly forgot my manners, Mrs. Peel:
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posted on
08/29/2007 6:01:04 PM PDT
by
Old Sarge
(This tagline in memory of FReeper 68-69TonkinGulfYachtClub)
To: MrsEmmaPeel
"I so enjoy discussions like these", she said wielding a bloody axe in her hand.Maybe you should see a doctor about your possible(subconscious) homicidal tendency's, grammar be damned. ;)
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posted on
08/29/2007 6:02:16 PM PDT
by
processing please hold
(Duncan Hunter '08) (ROP and Open Borders-a terrorist marriage and hell's coming with them)
To: Old Sarge
I’m out of wine. Is that the Minister of Magic on the right? Nice bowler.
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posted on
08/29/2007 6:02:37 PM PDT
by
Tax-chick
(Gravity! It's not just a good idea, it's the law!)
To: firebrand
ax is preferred to axe (nobody said that one)Depends who you axe.
(Somebody had to say it).
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posted on
08/29/2007 6:02:38 PM PDT
by
dighton
To: MrsEmmaPeel
Hmmmmmm...usually I’m on duty as the grammar/spelling police but that one is a little tricky. Nonetheless I’d say “discussions like this” since the discussion she is referring to is just one discussion.
Just my guess...there’s a reason I didn’t take AP English!
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posted on
08/29/2007 6:03:01 PM PDT
by
G8 Diplomat
(From my fist to Harry Reid's face)
To: Tax-chick
Having been castigated by my editor for so many years, something had to stick in my brain. Punctuation before quotations was one I finally learned.
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posted on
08/29/2007 6:04:56 PM PDT
by
irishtenor
(There is no "I" in team, but there are two in IDIOT.)
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