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To: Soaring Feather

A Moment of Discovery

Soft, soft, the coming night enfolds
As the sun wraps itself in rose and pearl
And bids night a sweet adieu again
Stars sweep the sky in silent celebration
And the moon dances a silver lullaby
To the music of the spheres on high
Such a moment the heart holds
And emotions begin to unfurl
Loosening the grip of ancient pains
Life becomes a joyous sensation
Under the canopy of eve’s sky
When love smiles from your eyes


595 posted on 08/29/2007 6:45:09 PM PDT by WayzataJOHNN ( Poetry is the jazz of words, laid down by a feeling soul.)
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To: WayzataJOHNN

oh my, exquisite poetry.


596 posted on 08/29/2007 6:50:14 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (I Soar 'cause I can....)
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To: All

A good evening to you all, and i hope someone here is in mischief up to their ears!!!! (not enough of that going a round you know.)

Group poem time. Let’s do a Tanka, a chain of Haiku connected by two 7 count lines.

Here’s a start

Willows weep so soft
as dew dresses them in gems
like ladies noble

Silent courts of Evergreens
Where seasons set the dress code

(Put your Haiku here and your tow lines for the next poet)


597 posted on 08/29/2007 7:03:50 PM PDT by WayzataJOHNN ( Poetry is the jazz of words, laid down by a feeling soul.)
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