[RightWhale]

post a paragraph or two of what they're working on and others can critique it

Not a chance pph. I have to back off a lot as it is to let my posts get past the censor and little would remain of the real stuff. :)

[processing please hold]

I definately understand that.

I remember when I used to attend a writer's class, we would do that. Of course FR isn't the place for some of the things I heard in that class. It would get pulled pdq. lol