I thought it was tight and dramatic; this Sim is a guy worth watching.
What is clever here is that this episode could be used as an opening paragraph or it could be inserted anywhere in the work; even as an ending, whetting our appetites for more.
Ther incident occurs in the middle of a novel I wrote. Margaret possessed a document leading to people whom Mossad, a pharmaceutical company Veep, and a science magazine reproter/writer are keen to find. The document was ‘seeded’ with her as a means to a very deep secret being revealed. Margaret’s title is Head of the Department of Archaeology and Anthropoly at The University of Alabama.