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To: RightWhale

I use the technique in nearly every novel I write because it seems I’m now doomed to write novels which work off of science themes. The occasional scene for transition works well in passive voice, also.


384 posted on 04/21/2007 9:38:12 AM PDT by MHGinTN (You've had life support. Promote life support for others.)
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To: MHGinTN

It’s one technique that needs to be mastered in modern novel writing if the author is to be authoritative in the modern technological society. The machinery is brought under control (passive!) and humanity is reasserted (passive!).


385 posted on 04/21/2007 10:07:47 AM PDT by RightWhale (3 May '07 3:14 PM)
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To: MHGinTN

Passive voice certainly has its uses, As I mentioned earlier, is shortens things.

Carton you must be about ready for bed there.


388 posted on 04/21/2007 11:24:17 AM PDT by squarebarb
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