He writes mostly in the passive voice.
The only time I notice the passive voice is when it is pointed out to me. Other than that, I don't. Not when I read... I never stop and say, my word, this is all written in passive voice.
It is easily corrected. But I wonder if it really is that big of a deal.
For the most part, I use passive voice only when I have to. Active voice is easier to write in.
I will check my King James here in a minute.
I can imagine that modern and ancient Hebrew are very different — what we have in the KJ is, I think, from about 700 B.C. and of course there must be vast changes. But I wonder how it changed, since it was not a generally-used language from -— maybe 200 A.D.?
Modern English and even Middle Ages English are very different.
No, I don’t care for Arthur Haily much either. His writing is very flat. In a bit I will see if I can come up with some passive voice examples.