Don’t be impressed by me. My writing accomplishments are minor indeed.
Mine, too. I have so very much to be humble about (plagiarized from Churchill).
I think I mentioned it before but shifting between narrative summary and a direct scene is important.
I try to keep chapters to about ten pages although that's not always possible.
Carton thanks for the heads up.
But it is really important not to have one direct scene after another.
By the way Cormac McCarthy won the Pulitzer which makes me happy, very happy for him.
Another question, do any of you often read the reader's comments on Amazon?