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To: Oberon
No, it was very helpful. All your tips are. I have learned so much.

When the club started my 1500 page manuscript (not finished) needed help. I was trying to please too many audiences and ended up not pleasing anyone.

I got my focus back.

I have taken the editing razor to it and even though I am adding more descriptive elements, I have taken about 50 pages out of the first 400.

I am also using my descriptive narratives to introduce "little dialogues" which bring my characters in focus.

I have stripped whole scenes out that make the book read much better.

Two weeks ago, I was despairing, ready to quit because my new opening "with histories and biographies added" was trashed by a friend because it was "rote." Now, I have a manuscrip that I am very happy with.

That is why this club is important to me. And meeting such accomplished writers like you have really made a difference.

346 posted on 04/13/2007 7:50:32 AM PDT by carton253 (Not enough space to express how I truly feel.)
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To: carton253
And meeting such accomplished writers like you have really made a difference.

Don't be impressed by me. My writing accomplishments are minor indeed.

347 posted on 04/13/2007 8:13:11 AM PDT by Oberon (What does it take to make government shrink?)
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