[Scourge of God]

I can write page after page of dialoge, but when it comes to descriptive.... I just feel like I'm slogging away. And it reads like that too.

I'll bet it isn't as bad as you think. (As long as you're not being corny!). Those hard slogs are sucky, but it's always worth it when you come out on the other end.

You could post some description you've written, and the rest of us could critique it.

[carton253]

Let me find something... I'll be right back.