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Posted on 03/23/2007 11:44:31 AM PDT by Eleutheria5

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To: squarebarb
Well Happy Birthday To You!

Good thing you cannot hear me sing (cause I can't)...

But here is wishing you a very happy birthday.

Eat a piece of birthday cake for me. (Israel doesn't have good icing at all MHO)

Happy Birthday again!

241 posted on 04/04/2007 11:00:07 AM PDT by carton253 (Not enough space to express how I truly feel.)
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To: carton253

thank you!


242 posted on 04/04/2007 11:08:14 AM PDT by squarebarb ("He that keepeth Israel neither slumbers nor sleeps." Psalm 121)
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To: squarebarb

Today is Good Friday and a new day on the writer's thread.

What is everybody reading? Carton, how is your first chapter going? Do you have time to write?

243 posted on 04/06/2007 6:56:36 AM PDT by squarebarb ("He that keepeth Israel neither slumbers nor sleeps." Psalm 121)
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To: squarebarb
I make the time to write. The first chapter is finished. I need to get an actual name to replace the one I made up... but other than that the first six chapters are done. They need polish, but I am very please with what I have.

How was your day?

I hope you are doing well!

244 posted on 04/07/2007 1:44:02 PM PDT by carton253 (Not enough space to express how I truly feel.)
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To: carton253

I am doing great with another inch of rain and cool days here.

I work outside and think about a place where I am stuck in my writing. I hope to get unstuck soon.

I don’t think the custom at present is to title each chapter. But if you are thinking of a title for the whole book how about some variation of ‘let us cross over the river and rest in the shade of the trees’?


245 posted on 04/09/2007 7:51:51 AM PDT by squarebarb ("He that keepeth Israel neither slumbers nor sleeps." Psalm 121)
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To: squarebarb

Let Us Cross Over


246 posted on 04/09/2007 7:52:47 AM PDT by Oberon (What does it take to make government shrink?)
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To: squarebarb; Oberon
No, that was not the title of the chapter. That as the title of the book. I could not imagine having to come up with titles for chapters. Pretty soon, I would be reduced to things like - The Next One. Or Two Away From Thirty.

It comes from a statement Jackson made before the war. He said, "if war does come, we need to draw our sword and throw away the scabbard." So the book's title is THROW AWAY THE SCABBARD.

Usually, when I am stuck, I go back over what I have done before so I don't get out of the habit of being before the manuscript every day.

247 posted on 04/09/2007 8:39:03 AM PDT by carton253 (Not enough space to express how I truly feel.)
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To: carton253

“Two Away From Thirty” LOL


248 posted on 04/09/2007 8:49:06 AM PDT by squarebarb ("He that keepeth Israel neither slumbers nor sleeps." Psalm 121)
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To: carton253
Throw Away the Scabbard works. Interestingly, it too is a Jackson quote.

Ironically, Jackson and Lee saw completely eye-to-eye on such matters as bravery, honor, and military tradition, but Lee may well have done better to depend on Longstreet as a tactician. Longstreet was of course also a brave man, but not the modern-day knight of chivalry that Jackson and Lee both were.

Longstreet's was a more forward-thinking vision, and it marked him as a general of the Grant mold. He understood how to use modern weaponry to slaughter the enemy in industrial quantities.

249 posted on 04/09/2007 8:49:09 AM PDT by Oberon (What does it take to make government shrink?)
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To: Oberon
I think Lee was a brilliant tactician and Longstreet's problems (of which he had many) hindered Lee more than it helped. I don't think, when Longstreet was separated from Lee, he proved that he was not as good as he thought he was.

But, I like Longstreet. After all, he's Old Pete.

I am Jackson fan first and foremost. And who does not love Jeb Stuart? Besides Sheridan. I admire Lee's character.

250 posted on 04/09/2007 8:56:19 AM PDT by carton253 (Not enough space to express how I truly feel.)
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To: carton253
I think Lee was a brilliant tactician and Longstreet's problems (of which he had many) hindered Lee more than it helped. I don't think, when Longstreet was separated from Lee, he proved that he was as good as he thought he was.

Proofread, proofread, proofread.

251 posted on 04/09/2007 8:57:47 AM PDT by carton253 (Not enough space to express how I truly feel.)
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To: carton253
Re 251 - No, the first post #250 was correct. 251 is not right.

Oh my word...

252 posted on 04/09/2007 9:00:57 AM PDT by carton253 (Not enough space to express how I truly feel.)
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To: Oberon
It doesn't matter if it's not your best work. That's what drafts are for.

The way I heard it best was, "Give yourself permission to suck."

253 posted on 04/09/2007 9:04:45 AM PDT by Bubba Ho-Tep
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To: carton253
Dang...I was two paragraphs into a reply before I realized I was committing a thread hijacking.

"Writing," he told himself furiously, "...this thread is about writing!"

The war appears to be a study of the choice between losing nobly and winning ugly. That choice is the source of endless debate, none of which is appropriate to this thread. I confess, by way of conclusion, that I too admire men like Jackson. He was arguably the William Wallace of his cause, a man utterly devoted to victory and unafraid of death.

It is well that he was unafraid, for death certainly found him.

254 posted on 04/09/2007 9:09:50 AM PDT by Oberon (What does it take to make government shrink?)
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To: Bubba Ho-Tep
The way I heard it best was, "Give yourself permission to suck."

That works, in the interest of generating some ore to refine.

255 posted on 04/09/2007 9:11:26 AM PDT by Oberon (What does it take to make government shrink?)
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To: Oberon
No worries... after today, we will stick to writing.

I have followed your advice and taken a very heavy editing pen to my manuscript. It really does create a new work.

256 posted on 04/09/2007 9:23:09 AM PDT by carton253 (Not enough space to express how I truly feel.)
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To: Bubba Ho-Tep
I have to ask - where did your screen name come from?

Are you on the ping list?

What kind of writing do you do?

257 posted on 04/09/2007 9:23:58 AM PDT by carton253 (Not enough space to express how I truly feel.)
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To: Oberon

The other best advice I ever heard for writers was, “Every day, get dressed.” I once heard a story about John Cheever, who would get up every morning and put on a suit and tie. Then he’d take the elevator down to the basement of his apartment building, where he had a desk in the boiler room. There he would take off the suit, carefully hang it from a pipe, and work in his underwear to cope with the heat. At the end of the day, he’d put the suit back on and ride the elevator back up to his apartment.


258 posted on 04/09/2007 9:26:26 AM PDT by Bubba Ho-Tep
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To: carton253

I remember reading a quote from a famous writer whose name I can’t remember, from one of his letters: “I’m sorry this letter is so long; I didn’t have time to make it short.”


259 posted on 04/09/2007 9:27:40 AM PDT by Oberon (What does it take to make government shrink?)
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To: carton253
where did your screen name come from?

It's the title of a very silly movie in which Elvis Presley, having faked his death and now confined to a nursing home in Texas, battles an Egyptian mummy. Oh, and Ossie Davis plays JFK, also in the same home.

Are you on the ping list?

No, but please add me.

What kind of writing do you do?

The short answer is "whatever pays." Mostly that means marketing copywriting of various sorts, although I dabble in screenwriting.

260 posted on 04/09/2007 9:32:47 AM PDT by Bubba Ho-Tep
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