I tend to agree. But I think constructing the telltale indicators as an appendix to the document is a little troubling. They could have made it part of the investigative section, thus giving it more importance than having it appear to be a less important afterthought.
There was also the need to
get safely past the election.
Wonder if those two girls
know each other. About the same
age. High-school? The chief
is a Hillside man.