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To: JenB; Lil'freeper; Rose in RoseBear; Overtaxed; TalonDJ

Not ready for Nano. I need to have the "prophecy" written afore I start writing.

Mine centers around a "prophecy" that has been misheard. It's turned into a snarkly little childrens' rhyme because they got the words wrong.

But when it's heard correctly the prophecy is revealed...and fulfilled.

It needs work.


3,376 posted on 10/23/2006 6:02:25 AM PDT by Corin Stormhands (http://wardsmythe.com)
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To: Corin Stormhands
"Stand by the grey stone when the thrush knocks, and the setting sun with the last light of something or other will shine some place."
3,377 posted on 10/23/2006 6:22:45 AM PDT by TalonDJ
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To: Corin Stormhands; JenB; Rose in RoseBear; Overtaxed; TalonDJ

The only things I'm missing are 1) time to actually do this and 2) stronger characterization for my MC. He's turning out to be a bit boring compared to the more colorful characters in the crew.


3,378 posted on 10/23/2006 6:25:57 AM PDT by Lil'freeper (You do not have the plug-in required to view this tagline.)
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