[RosieCotton]

Heh...the "thing he found last week" could be an interesting twist.

He runs and runs and runs thinking someone's after him 'cause of the Nigerian scam deal, and then they finally catch him and it turns out they're just alien kids who accidentally lost the equivalent of their frisbee and want it back.

[TalonDJ]

Better yet, 'that think he bought off ebay last week' hehe. The story would be all about the perils of the Internet.

[TalonDJ]

I just thought of a bout 5 more big twists... I am starting to think I will really have to write this one. The nice thing is it is so messed up that plotting in advance, far from being a temptation, is impossible.