Sounds very 80s to me. Neon colors were where it was at. ;-)
Ungh...I don't have a whole lot to do here and I'd like to work on my story, but I can't figure out how to fill the massive, whooshing hole in its heart so I can continue.
I need a reason for a corrupt transport agency to use bio weapons, and a reason why someone would have power over them by simply knowing a piece of info.
Er...transport agency probably should be more like shipping company. Not travel.