"Why would you suggest 'fading' the truth for effect?"
No one is suggesting fading "the truth" for effect. But in order to change the hearts and minds of people, we have to make sure that our stories are believable. Wagglebee tells a very effective story, but it would be a shame to let inconsistancies eclipse the truth: abortion has two victims, the baby and the mother.
Your suggestions smack of deceit ... previously you suggested 'tossing in a case of breast cancer too'. There is no inconsistency with truth, but you appear eager to create some inconsistency notion. You are suggesting deceit for effect. Truth needs no deceit to be effective.
For the last time, I didn't "tell" any story, I posted the story of an anonymous FReeper. I didn't give "pointers" or edit it in any manner.