Here is the re-edited Director's cut version... (157)
Sweet stuff, Roscoe! By the way, I remember hearing the great Warner Bros animator, Chuck Jones, talk about the deplorable state of cartoons, circa 1965. The one exception was the work of Jay Ward. Jones said Rocky & Bullwinkle proved you didn't need great animation to be amazing--you only needed the genius of Jay Ward. Anyway, the point is, your stuff reminds me of him. Your writing is so good that the pictures almost seem to be talking!