You're going to be heavily penalized by the judges, both on technical merit and artistic impression.
I mean, you called that mess an "excerpt" and didn't even provide a link to your own site for those masochistic enough to want to read the rest.. Then you posted in all caps.
AND, you didn't even bother to tell us which state is the source of your vast political acumen.
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http://209.157.64.200/~nextrush/