[Soaring Feather]

Good Sunday morning all.

[Soaring Feather]

Surreal

Images muted, buried and drown
others barely hanging on to ground
a dream world, maybe so,
someones nightmare from long ago?

Is the wait one of ebbing, or total immersion
A lens eye captures the wait
we can't forecast when the drying out will begin
or when all that was is now gone.
A relic to another world, in a shimp sunset.

bentfeather (c) 02.12.06

[ScubieNuc]

How's this for better form?

First glimpse,
Intrigue, excitement
Yearning to stare,
Peeking.

First meeting,
Nervous, shaking
Babbling silly nonsense,
Embarrassed.

First connection,
Elation, floating
Sharing a long laugh,
Invincible.

First kiss
Tingling, numb
Breathing deep sighs
Amazed.

First love,
Intoxicating, stimulating
Nothing else matters
Unforgettable!