[ScubieNuc]

Thank you for your advise. I like both structure adjustments.

I know my abstract wording needs poetic help!

I vaguely remember that there were some rythmic rules or guidelines? What was that based on? I know that there are many different syles, but I am just looking for something that might fit with my abstract ramblings. 8^)

[Soaring Feather]

Well, WayzataJohnn offered to email you some structure.I am a rebel and use Free Verse. I don't like rules!!LOL

Free Verse just came to me in 1980. That's when I started to write after raising my family of four daughters.


I would not be to concerned about rules, they inhibit a body IMHO.

A poem does not have to rhyme. Many people believe this.