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To: HopeandGlory
deafening silence
dark places big holes
timeless time catapulting

bentfeather

abandoned by love
empty of fruitful passion
silence fills my heart

hope


you took the music
left me with a hollow drum
beating for a heart

bentfeather
890 posted on 10/12/2005 6:44:34 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (If down is up, is up, down. Feathers in the wind.)
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To: bentfeather

"you took the music
left me with a hollow drum
beating for a heart"

You have done it, Miss 'Feather!

I've never seen a better haiku!


895 posted on 10/12/2005 7:09:40 PM PDT by NicknamedBob (George asked me for the best poet... I looked and looked ... I couldn't find anyone better than me.)
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