[OESY]

Your new free form poetry is awfully hard to follow. Heck, I couldn't even find one rhyme.

[NicknamedBob]

She could have used faeries or elves as the protagonists,
But then it would not have been the same story,
A story of a boy who was burdened by his ordinaryness,
"I'm just Harry..." -- until he discovered some hidden strengths.

Yeah, you're right! It's pretty lame.

I have to consciously suppress sometimes,
That well-trained tendency to speak in rhymes.