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To: vigilanteonvigilante
interesting responses.

If you are looking for a critique of your first day, first post---it is a disjointed, difficult read with a bad title, and weak finish.

40 posted on 03/01/2005 8:32:20 AM PST by NautiNurse (Osama bin Laden has more tapes than Steely Dan)
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To: NautiNurse
... difficult read with a bad title ...

Wait a minute, wait a minute! The title's ending is good, if I may say so myself as its author.

;-)

67 posted on 03/01/2005 8:54:16 AM PST by Admin Moderator
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To: NautiNurse
If you are looking for a critique of your first day, first post---it is a disjointed, difficult read with a bad title, and weak finish.

Don't forget the misspellings!

76 posted on 03/01/2005 9:01:20 AM PST by RushCrush (Even fanatical Muslim terrorists don’t hate America like liberals do.- Coulter)
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