I like the way he's doing it... You're giving a fair input, and he's bending and giving to it. He's supple and willing. As a dressage gymnastic excercise, he'd be doing well. You could crank him around faster, but he'd probably just get sitffer and open his mouth.
I was looking at my hands, (one reason I hate pictures of me, you see your mistakes, but then you learn). My outside rein is pulled to tight, and a little high.
Becky