Well, which one do you like best? post that one.
I'm not quite happy with any of them... 'cause I
keep running into barriers... they all start the same.
In the radiance of the forgotten ruins
I mourn for love long gone
in the beauty of the misty morn,
in the silence of the dawn.
I wander the ancient halls alone,
my heart beaten, broken, torn
as the once mighty ancient stone
that lays before me on the floor....
From here on out they're different & it doesn't
seem right to just leave it like that, but that's
the only piece I'm actually happy with.