[Toonces T. Cat]

You can't say anything worse than my editor already tells me, so have at it...:-)

-Toonces

[Tijeras_Slim]

Sighthound bump... Basenjis in my case.

[Awestruck]

How could one criticize a story that is close to your heart? If you were putting this out for popular consumption, for sale, it would be different, but this is for you and as such there is not a blessed thing wrong with it.
Having lost close friends myself, I can understand where the story comes from.