To: al_possum39
Very Good. Excellent craftmanship.
89 posted on
09/12/2004 7:38:20 AM PDT by
NicknamedBob
(John Flip-Flop Kerry led our nation to military defeat before ... He's just the man to do it again!)
To: ST.LOUIE1; Mama_Bear; Billie; dansangel; dutchess; Aquamarine; Jim Robinson; LadyX; WVNan; ...

Graphic by Billie
Hurricane Sky
Cloud bellies, looking muscular,
Big knots of corded strength,
Like rippled abs up in the sky,
I studied them at length.
A hurricane sky came strolling,
Along my stretch of beach,
A muscled bit of cumulus,
Just slightly out of reach.
I stared into the cauldron,
The writhing mass at play.
It roiled and folded constantly.
Things could go wrong this day.
The surf was pounding out the steps,
As clouds walked over land.
Somehow I knew that they were not,
Here to just pound sand.
The portents of a message,
Were all quite abundantly clear,
When Mother Nature speaks her piece,
Its wise to lend an ear.
NicknamedBob . . . . . September 9, 2004
90 posted on
09/12/2004 8:10:56 AM PDT by
JustAmy
(9-11-01 ..... We Will Not Forget!!!)
To: NicknamedBob
Thanks but I'm not too sure about the craftsmanship being good since I just found another error in the third verse.
I have problems with anything that the spell checker won't catch.
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