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Forgotten Planet



I ask my daughter to name the planets.
"Venus ...Mars ...and Plunis!" she says.
When I was six or seven my father
woke me in the middle of the night.
We went down to the playground and lay
on our backs on the concrete looking up
for the meteors the tv said would shower.

I don't remember any meteors. I remember
my back pressed to the planet Earth,
my father's bulk like gravity next to me,
the occasional rumble from his throat,
the apartment buildings dark-windowed,
the sky close enough to poke with my finger.

Now, knowledge erodes wonder.
The niggling voce reminds me that the sun
does shine on the dark side of the moon.
My daughter's ignorance is my bliss.
Through her eyes I spy like a voyeur.

I travel in a rocket ship to the planet Plunis.
On Plunis I no longer long for the past.
On Plunis there are actual surprises.
On Plunis I am happy.

Doug Dorph

Johnmiserable failureKerry

310 posted on 08/04/2004 5:44:28 AM PDT by SAMWolf (Was today really Necessary?)
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To: SAMWolf


Forgotten Planet
by bentfeather

Plunis is the place I'll go
where the alto sax blows low
blues is the name of the game
Plunis is the name of the plane

A blues heaven
singin' low and moanin' blue
planet's whirlin', spinnin', too
comets doing the dirty rag
an odd odyssey away out there
asteroids large and lumpy
travelin' field kinda bumpy

Come on take a ride to Plunis
country side
watch the shootin' stars with me
the weird creatures in things
that look like trees
seventeen legged bees
on Plunis wild and wonder
a nightmare in rhapsody blue
I'd gladly listen to with you.....


311 posted on 08/04/2004 6:22:00 AM PDT by Soaring Feather
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