It's vey good! :) When you read it let me know what you get out of it. Are you writing anything now?
I've got outlines, ideas. A paragraph or two here and there. There are three brainstorms in progress: 1) a collection of horrible, twisted fairy tales, 2) a short story about a society based on "blue zone" beliefs and 3) a fantasy-type storiverse which is based on nano-tech. The last is probably stale and cliche at this point. I think #2 has the most potential and is my answer to "What would happen if we just built a wall around the cities and left all the leftists to their own devices?" I've got the major plot points outlined, I'm just struggling with point of view. That and actually *finishing* something. :)