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To: Darksheare; bentfeather; SAMWolf; Conspiracy Guy

Darksheare and I were working on a song/poem together.

Tell us how you like it.


Tears

Glittering tears are the stars in my eyes,
When I think of your leaving I moisten my skies.
The starlight through oceans seeps down to my soul,
And threatens my vision with loss of control.

I used to look up to a sky that we shared,
Whose sparkles reflected from those ebon-haired,
Tresses that danced in the wind of the hill,
As we listened and looked, and our hearts grew more still.

In the quiet of evening we once were one,
In the birth of the life that was shadowed by sun.
We lived for the end of the day of bright light,
For we both seemed to bloom in the cool of the night.

But the shadows can’t hide that I’m standing alone,
And since you’ve been gone I’m in darkness my own.
If the sunlight I shun and its absence I fear,
I will see all the world through the lens of a tear.


A Collaboration by NicknamedBob and Darksheare

June 16, 2004


145 posted on 06/17/2004 3:34:40 PM PDT by NicknamedBob (You don't find happiness, you WILL it -- just as you will an open hand, instead of a clenched fist.)
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To: NicknamedBob; Darksheare

Nice job.

First collaborated Poem I can remember reading.


146 posted on 06/17/2004 3:41:49 PM PDT by SAMWolf (I've been seduced by the chocolate side of the force.)
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To: NicknamedBob; Darksheare
Congratulations you two for collaborating on this work.


Darksheare, Bob, this work is absolutely beautiful. The graphic images are very strong. Have you any idea where you may find the musical accompaniment? I am so proud of both of you.
147 posted on 06/17/2004 3:46:06 PM PDT by Soaring Feather (~The Dragon Flies' Lair~ Poetry and Prose~)
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To: NicknamedBob; Darksheare
Well you both seem to be mercenaries
148 posted on 06/17/2004 4:27:50 PM PDT by Conspiracy Guy (I will never give up. So don't ask me.)
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