[Darksheare]

I'm in thread.
Have some small snippets of stuff that popped into my head, now I have ot make them make sense and flow.

This snippet is to the chorus section of the tune "Bother" by Stone Sour:

Give me all your love
Tell me all your dreams
Hold me close through the cold dark night
But please don't shatter me

Another snippet written to a different tune:

Ah you've broken me, down on bended knee
and what I feel inside
all I cannot hide
dark fields and lies
Out from your mouth, I'm chokin'
ripped from my heart, I'm broken
all I cannot be, what you meant to me
behind the scenes I see
stretched out in front of me
as I crawl over me
as you're wounding me down on bended knee
and I hear the lies
all I can't deny
dark fields and lies.

(It's to a tune by the band Seether. The words posted are by me though.)

[Soaring Feather]

Good morning Darksheare.

Wow!! Good lyrics. Thanks much. I hope you can do something with the lyrics you write, have you submitted your work?

[Colonel_Flagg]

Darksheare is back! Nicely done!

[SAMWolf]

Hi Darksheare. Wandering around?

[snippy_about_it]

Good stuff. You find the neatest lyrics.