[GeronL]

Judging by the title I'd say he was aiming for humor... and he works in the real estate business, so writing must be a second income

[Happygal]

I'm not really trying to be argumentative here.

I just don't think the piece is very good.
The big 'A-ha, but you didn't know this' revelation at the end is...well, corny (if he's going for humour).


Anyway, that's just my opinion on it.

I'm sure others thought/think it was great?