[Darksheare]

Sis, she said I worry too much about poemic flow..
*stifled giggle*

[snippy_about_it]

ROTFLOL. Allright Darksheare! I can hear you snickering.

[Darkchylde]

She just hasn't heard me complain.
Even my posts have to be a certain
length, don't they? If what I'm writing
(poem or otherwise)is short, it looks
unfinished to me & I'll spend hours trying
to make it look right to me. There is one
poem I've written that is rather short. It
looks wrong to me, but when I show it to
my brother, he says it looks fine. It doesn't
even have a name 'cause I'm not happy with
it, though I can't think of more to write.

The mourning dove mourns my love,
for my love has gone away.
Lonliness unfurled,
I've colored my world in hues of blue & gray.
Silenced cries, despairing sighs,
I long for a brighter day...

It just LOOKS too short.