[Conspiracy Guy]

With some help from XSMOMMY, LAURA EARL, and Steve Goodman I wrote this little Redneck Birthday tribute fer yunz.

Friday, Tiger’s forty,
Whyisa will not tell.
Secret keeps her secret,
Someone ring the bell.
Class will start on time I hope,
For these few days are big,
Happy Birthday all of yall,
Secret, Why, and Tig.
I would end now but I must add,
XS has a request.
Quit acting like a bunch of Ho s,
There, I’ve said the rest.

Narrative:

I wrote this pome for some friends of mine and I felt I had written the perfect redneck birthday pome. My friends told me it wasn’t the perfect redneck pome because I didn’t say anything about, momma, drinking, trucks, trains, or rain.

So I sat back down and wrote another verse and here’s how it goes.

Hobbes was drunk, the day Whyisa,
Got out of prison.
And he went, to pick her up,
In the rain.
But before he could get to the station,
In his momma’s truck.
She and Secret done robbed the train.


Flurry 11/25/03

[xsmommy]

that is the best thing you have ever WROTE! ; )

[Gabz]

Good job!!!!!

[WhyisaTexasgirlinPA]

Excellent Flurry! ROFL....... Thank you

[RikaStrom]

LOL, with a wink and a nod to David Allen Coe.

[Central Scrutiniser]

Steve Goodman is an all time favorite of mine, sadly, few people know of his great music, he died much too young...

As for music, I'm listening to Kmher violin while drinking an Angkor beer in a bar called "Dead Fish Tower" in Siem Reap, Cambodia.

I love the internet!

[secret garden]

David Allen Coe is looking for you. He said something about having you hang around as long as we will let you?

[NYC GOP Chick]

Someone's ready for your big birthday party! Hope you have a great one! :)

[hobbes1]

Great Rhyme Flurry!